Showing posts with label debrief. Show all posts
Showing posts with label debrief. Show all posts

Wednesday, 11 December 2013

Critical Reflection of WINOL and The Justice Gap

WINOL teamed up with The Justice Gap (TJG) this semester offering the crime unit the opportunity to engage in weekly Skype conferences and pitch news stories to the editor Jon Robins. TJG is an online trade magazine, covering national stories for legal professionals; the target audience is a niche market interested in the law and justice. With a focused audience, it’s easier to target stories that will be of public interest to that particular group, but with WINOL we often debate who we are aiming our news to. I personally think we have established equilibrium by broadcasting a mixture of stories that would interest young and older age groups. Suggestions arise that if we focused on campus stories we would attract a large student population but I think this would diminish the reputation we have built of WINOL in the community. Access Winchester, which covers entertainment and reviews of 'Whats on', could focus more on campus news and events to act as a mini bulletin for the student generation, this would allow our news bulletin to focus solely on news across the Hampshire region targeting the older generation.

The collaboration of WINOL with TJG was one of the biggest changes this semester. TJG website underwent a complete makeover at the start of the term to increase search engine optimisation, and it now receives approximately 500 views daily. Contributors are legal professionals including lawyers and top QCs; which results in content that is opinionated and biased. This is why Winchester journalism students become a valuable partnership, we write objective reports steering away from the vision of campaigning. On average the time spent on TJG is approximately 4 minutes, (Alexa data 6/12/2013) regular content, including videos, is uploaded throughout the week with something new uploaded every day.

Next semester, I think the collaboration of WINOL and TJG should have a greater online presence, showcasing the partnership through a picture logo linking to a direct Winchester journalism page on TJG. Similarly this could be done with Radio so viewers can click on a picture icon to listen to the podcasts.

Social media has played a vital role in spreading stories around; with over 4500 followers on TJG, articles receive a lot of attention and approx 5-15 re-tweets for each of my articles. WINOL has just over 1500 followers on twitter which has only increased by about 150 followers since May this year. We should be following all the local charities, organisations and groups that our stories target; we are not following enough people that would be interested in our stories, and I think this would have a huge domino effect on the number of views our bulletin and website receive if we maximised the use of social media. Although we have built up a brilliant reputation on WINOL with the authorities that we interview, we need to advertise it more to make residents aware that we are a reliable source of news. If a small business group was set up we could aim to increase advertisement and marketing for WINOL.

With an assigned sub team this semester, text stories have started to improve in terms of SEO, ensuring articles have tags, focus keywords and photographs which was re-enforced by guest editor Paul Wood. Appointing a front page editor was a good decision as we can focus on what story is the most popular and continue to shuffle the website around to give a sense of a live feed. However, stories are very static from one Wednesday to the next, and in comparison to last year, where reporters were assigned to days the amount of content uploaded to the site has dipped. Earlier this year visitors to the site were spending approximately 5.16 minutes (19/5/13) and this has halved to 2.44minutes now.(Alexa figures 6/12/13) We can improve this by setting up a small team interested in news writing to turn around stories that go unused in the Google mail account, this would avoid the excuse of trying to cover a story that lacked pictures, because it was simply a text story. An example of this are the Inquests I attended at a coroner’s court, all three cases worked very well as interesting text stories but certainly not for TV, so I think we need to pay as close attention to other articles online to improve news writing skills as well as broadcast skills.

A big achievement for the team this year was winning the BJTC award: ‘Best News Day of the year’. Students received certificates for coming runner up in two other categories: 'Website of the year' and 'Radio feature of the year'. This highlights the success and commitment from the team who take pride in our student broadcast.

The first week as a Justice Gap reporter was a leap from my role as court reporter on WINOL, I found the role similar to a legal correspondent, researching and gaining knowledge in areas of civil rights and criminal justice, and often reporting on law reforms. I still attended court weekly, but took a more editorial approach allowing the other crime reporters to gain experience. I continued to offer up story ideas and coach them through what I had learned over the past year with finding out about court listings, scripting PTC, getting mugshots from Police and abiding by laws of contempt ensuring the defendant was positively identified to prevent defamation.

A personal achievement for me was breaking a big story that cameras were to begin filming inside the Court of Appeal before any other news broadcaster. I received this information after calling the press office with the initial impression that it was going to happen next week, but they informed me it was due to take place tomorrow and they sent me a press release embargoed to 6pm that day. I was proud to be part of this national buzz by sharing this exclusive news, moments ahead of SkyNews on Twitter.

Claudia Murg was a standout guest editor for me, she taught me the importance of self-reflection, planning, control and inquisitiveness she emphasised that journalism is all about contacts. Building relationships and keeping in touch with people gives you the advantage of finding out inside scoops. Taking this on board, I kept in close contact with a woman from the witness services at Winchester Crown Court, after interviewing her on a story regarding the new victim's code. I saw this as my closest chance to establish a contact from inside the court who could inform me of upcoming high profile cases, as unfortunately unlike big media agencies we cannot find out in advance what are the big cases to cover. I kept in touch with her via e-mail following the interview which led me to find out about an upcoming sexual offence case that she believed would receive a lot of media attention. To our surprise not many broadcasters covered the case and when I brought this to BBC South producer Poonam Bahal’s attention she was surprised they hadn’t covered it also. Ahead of Basingstoke Gazette who covered the trial, WINOL was the first source to break the news of this sentencing as I tweeted the judges summing up upon leaving the courtroom. This was one of my strongest packages, although it was lacking pictures, I set up an interview with the officer in charge of the case, and I was praised for having a genuine interest in the story, which came across in my PTC. For the first time I heard the victim statements read by the barrister in full before sentencing, so I did a follow up from the new code using this court report as a case study on TJG, and incorporating the view of a defence lawyer to see if it raised unrealistic expectations for victims.

In my first week the editor gave me feedback that I should be leading with the original source of quotes in regard to my article on the IPCC sign off into Cardiff Three Police corruption. I interviewed the investigative journalist Satish Sekar who worked closely on the case, and what he had to say had the power to lead the article. Journalism is about human interest and reaction, so I shouldn’t have buried his quotes lower down. I took this advice on and made a personal goal to lead every article with a top line unique to TJG.

A few examples of this are the interviews I set up with the Prison Reform Trust to get their reaction to government changes to prisoner’s privileges, the NSPCC’s response to the blocking of child abuse pornography online, and following criminal investigations into recent deaths in custody, I interviewed the director of ‘Inquest’ - a charity that carries out case work on the matter.

Common feedback in debriefs, was that we were not getting any case studies to add human interest to the story, e.g. coverage of job losses - we needed to hear from someone who had lost their job. When covering the Hillsborough Inquest, I interviewed a man who lost his brother in the crush which is a good example of getting comment from someone who it directly affects. This article alone received nearly 400 views which was ranked top three for Winchester student articles, amongst the Mansfield articles.

This was one of the first phone interviews I did, and I would jot down the key quotes throughout the conversation, this is where shorthand would come in handy, despite passing 60wpm, I found it easier to record the interview on a separate device.

The most memorable day for me was our trip to London. In one day I interviewed the country’s leading human rights Barrister Michael Mansfield and filmed David Jessel commissioner for the CCRC interviewing Eddie Gilfoyle, an alleged miscarriage of justice. The interview between Jessel and Gilfoyle was approx 40minutes, which I edited down to get to the heart of the punchy emotional impact. As you would with a voice over facts in our voice, opinion in theirs, the facts went into the article and the video highlighted his emotions.

I prepared for the Mansfield interview by researching into the high profile cases he covered and reading his book 'Memoirs of a Radical Lawyer'. That morning I was told he was launching his new chambers that day which he made clear was the news agenda he wanted to cover. I set up a YouTube account in order to upload video content to the website, and the Mansfield interview was posted online the following day receiving over 300 YouTube views. Speaking to such an influential man, there was an array of articles that could be covered on different news agendas; the privilege of keeping a shed load of stories in the can means you can pick the most suitable time to publish it. An example of this was the second Mansfield clipping on police corruption, which was topical around the time of the Plebgate scandal. I learnt that it is important to give someone the right to reply when covering a story - two legal giants Mansfield and Zander had conflicting views over legal aid funding, which is a good example of this, as I threw Zander’s opinion to Mansfield to spark a response therefore it was only fair to give Zander the right to reply. The Mansfield and Zander articles combined received over 1700 unique page views online.

The role of news editor rotated amongst reporters; although practising this role had good education value I personally think it affected the quality of WINOL's output. If it was someone’s sole responsibility they could continue to progress and enforce improvements each week. The standard of management alternates each time the role changes, affecting communication and output standard. Appointing a shadow editor would serve the same educational value, but allow one person to establish a recurring house style.

The partnership between the crime unit on WINOL with TJG helped me to broaden my skills in news gathering, writing, researching, interviewing and enrich my knowledge of national legal affairs that could be localised for WINOL. For instance I organised an interview with the Governor of Winchester Prison in our studio, which worked on both a local and national scale. This feature interview allowed me to cover several topics in depth, in comparison to needing a 20 second quote. I also got an exclusive news line here that was not covered elsewhere, regarding a new working regime for prisoners.

Finally, I feel I have demonstrated that I can carry out responsible journalism, reporting on current legal affairs and court proceedings has been an invaluable experience for me, putting myself in situations sometimes out of my comfort zone enhanced my learning. As Claudia Murg said, journalism is about being fearless and taking risks particularly at time where we have the support of our mentors and by following their expert advice we can shape our foundations in establishing a career in journalism.

Friday, 6 December 2013

Week 10: WINOL

On WINOL we have been extremely lucky to have guest editors visit the newsroom, and often have the expertise and advice of 4 or 5 professionals in the industry. This week Poonam Bahal from BBC South came to visit us, who was extremely impressed by the professionalism of our work. Credit to the news editor this week Matthew Spencer for managing the final WINOL bulletin in an efficient and experienced manner, pushing his reporters in the right direction, gathering story ideas and communicating with the entire team to find logical solutions that we face in Broadcast.

There was a great mix of stories this week:

University Strikes - This was a good package, rich with NATSOT and the pictures are all there, it was current as it happened the day before the bulletin, and included reaction from the lecturers. Perhaps it would of been nice to hear from students if the strikes affected them, as this is the second strike this term. Remember exposition is important, we shouldn't assume the audience know what the strike is all about and why they are striking, the link needed to explain it in a bit more detail.

Sir George Young Retiring - There was a lot of information to tell here, and you did this really well with graphics. There was good use of archive footage here also, however the sound levels needed to be lowered as it was was distracting from your voice over. Other then that, you set this up really well by using your initiative to go down to London in hope of securing an interview, but none the less you did a confident PTC outside Westminster.

Cops on the Bus - This was an interesting story, bobbies on the beat now on the bus to help crack down on dangerous drivers. You had access on to the bus to do your PTC which was engaging and creative, only downside here is it lacked pictures, think about other creative shots, for instance what is the view out of the window like from the top of the bus? Show the viewers. We really needed to see footage of coppers in operation on the bus but understand the difficulty of this.

Job losses - This was a nice round up of the job losses over the last month, and it was a nice peg to cover over Christmas. Very comical sign off, but remember to have one line of exposition before you sign off as it feels slightly out of place, perhaps a PTC outside the shipyards in Portsmouth would of helped break up the piece.

OOV belt - the top OOV needed to be the fire story it had the most impacting pictures. This was a good break away from the lengthy packages. Credit to the present

Sport - Strongest week for sport i'd say, and I liked the variety, especially the handball package as it adds something new rather then match reports all the time. I liked the use of graphics to keep track of the goals, it made it easier to follow.

Access Winchester - This was a good plug, teasing viewers to go to the website, but there was no link to direct people to where they can find it?


Saturday, 30 November 2013

Week 9 update

Justice Gap

In recent media there has been a few reports on criminal investigations into the treatment and care of mental health sufferers who have died in police custody. I felt this was an issue that the justice gap should cover following the alarming coverage of police misconduct in the press. The charity INQUEST which offers free advice to bereaved families has carried out a lot of casework which covers deaths in all forms of custody and detention, including prison, police, immigration and psyciatric detention. I spoke to the co-director of the charity who was preparing a report to brief MPs ahead of a parliamentary debate that day, she informed me of this therefore I wanted to address it to get fresh quotes rather then using the press release statement that was issued online.

INQUEST calls for action on ‘depressing regularity’ of deaths in custody


WINOL

WINOL this week was a huge push to get the second years to fill the bulletin, with the third year reporters all covering their own private projects it was down to the second years to bring in the stories. It has to be said that there was a disheartening attempt to bring in stories, and to see some reporters settle for an OOV when we were extremely light on packages made the editors job even more difficult as we had to find solutions to fill the bulletin. Luckily we had a reporter turn around a 2 minute package on the day which covered our award success; this was extremely efficient and appropriate considering it's not everyday we win awards. The biggest improvement this week was the use of case studies. In previous weeks this was a major disappointing factor that was addressed as people were broadcasting stories on job losses and cuts but there was no case study to illustrate how it was affecting people directly. Taking this on board reporters brought in two case studies this week which worked really well in adding human interest. Case studies add a depth to the piece which address the opinions of those involved, rather then just reporting on the facts. I thought the new editor this week did a good job in pushing reporters to continue to find another story if it fell through, consistently coming up with suggestions and solutions to encourage reporters.

I think the fact we now have a front page editor, and strong subs, the articles on the website are improving, and the regularity of changing the news around to suit what is receiving the most traffic is helping to lift the site. It feels as though there is more of a 'live' feed of news, compared to static stories that don't change until the next Wednesday. This can only continue to get better as reporters get into the habit of text stories.


Friday, 22 November 2013

Week 8: The Justice Gap

On Monday the biggest breaking story on the Today programme was the announcement that internet companies Google and Microsoft were going to block 100,000 search engine results relating to images of child abuse. This was the top story for most papers, and certainly breaking news for online websites. We agreed in the Skype conference that we had covered a lot of miscarriage of justice stories, and that we needed to add variation to the website. Therefore, I suggested to the editor that I could cover this topic with it being a big current issue. To move the story on from the new changes made I wanted to get the angle that addressed the victims involved, I did this by contacting children's charities to get their view on on the new changes. After speaking with the media team at the NSPCC I was in contact with the head of Child Saftey Online, following the phone interview I transcribed what she said and wrote my article up that outlined what changes she felt still needed to be done. To view the article click the headline link below.

This week was a good example of how to address the people that are affected by the story rather then the story itself and move it on. This is something the editor has always been in favour of so rather then leading with the story about Google blocking child porn, I lead with the reaction by the leading children's charity. Every story in journalism has to engage human interest, if no one is affected by it no audience will want to read it, therefore getting the reaction to the initial story is really important in addressing a fresh article.

More networks spreading ‘poisonous’ child abuse imagery need to be tackled


Also this week I was covering a sexual offence court report on Winchester News Online. After speaking with the victim support group a few weeks back regarding the changes to the victims code I thought it would be good to do a follow up and re-address this story using the court report as a case study. The man was convicted of 20 offences including rape over a period of eight years, he abused women who he was seeing and therefore this was a big case whereby the victims had to come forward in court and re-live these terrible experiences. I think it's important to address the bravery of the victims as speaking up in court is a difficult process. I used the interview from the victim support group and the officer leading the case to write an article about the significance of impact statements, but to move the article on, I got the view of a defence barrister to find out how beneficial they thought this new right would be and whether it gives victims unrealistic expectations. Speaking with the barrister was really interesting to hear it from a different perspective. Although the Government have introduced this new right, the barrister pointed out how victims have always been considered throughout the process, just not in a way that exploited to the public exactly how they were feeling. That is not to say they were not considered by the judge, they always have been. The benefit of reading the statements aloud in full in court raised doubts in the barristers mind. To read the full article click the headline below.

Impact statements may raise ‘unrealistic expectations’ for victims

Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Week 8: WINOL

Following on from Claudia's comments on the importance of contacts I got in touch with a connection down at court that I had worked with on a previous story. She informed me of a high profile case about a man who was convicted of 20 sexual offences; knowing about this in advance was a first for me, as usually with court it is pot luck with what case you may be sitting in.

When I went down to court the entire public gallery was packed with the victims, their families and members of the jury that had come back to see the sentencing. This was an extremely interesting case to witness as it was the first time that I had listened to the victim impact statements in full before the judges sentence. Often you hear that the victims statements are not read out, but a new code has been introduced where victims have been given the right to read out to the court how they have been affected personally by the crime. In this case, it was the barrister who read it out on behalf of the victims.

We are always told to think about the people affected by a story, and in this instance it was the victims, therefore I wanted to focus more on them by including quotes from their impact statements in my piece to camera, and my speaking to the officer in charge about the bravery of the victims who stepped forward. It was nice to interview the officer in charge of the case for once, as usually it is difficult to get hold of them, but following the length of this trial we agreed we were surprised there was not more press covering the case. She mentioned that Basingstoke Gazette interviewed her, but I am pleased to say that I reported on the story before they did when it is directly on their patch.

Due to the nature of this offence, there was a lot of hard-hitting quotes from the judge, this allowed me to script the story in a way that could really paint a picture of what his behaviour was like. Ian Anderson commented on the fact the piece to camera had colour and depth to it because it described what was going on inside the court, not only in regards to the defendant but also what it was like for the victims involved.

Ian Anderson mentioned that it was good to have a lead into the interview of us walking through the corridor, but if possible avoid boring backgrounds when filming the interview as it needed to have depth of field. But, he said that my package showed a logically process, and it felt neat from going from a PTC to an interview and returning back to a PTC to close it with the judges comments. Although court reports, especially those of a sexual nature, have very little images I feel I managed to tell the story in a way that painted a picture through words.

To watch the full bulletin:


Friday, 15 November 2013

Week 7: WINOL & The Justice Gap

This week sparked a huge thought process for me, after Claudia Murg's visit to the newsroom I've been left thinking about where I want to go within journalism and when she asked me what my plans are, I couldn't answer her. The truth is, I'm not certain what journey I may follow, all I know is that I am going to try grab every opportunity I can with both hands, experiment, take risks, challenge myself and just see where it is that my strengths lie, and who it is along the way that I may meet. Journalism is an exciting world, it opens so many doors, it's an adventure that leads you into new realms each and every day, but you really do have to live, eat and breathe it, it's an obsession and it does become your life. It's difficult to switch off, if you disconnect yourself from the world, you've missed out, but then there are always the unexpected moments where you do turn away, and these are the times you find yourself talking to someone who has an interesting story to share. There would be no journalism without people, the subject matter is always about who is affected.

I organised an interview with Winchester Prison Governor this week for a feature interview, immediately there was problems with getting access into the prison due to health and safety regulations but a mistake I made was to not go for the next best thing and film outside. Instead he came and joined us in our WINOL studio, but there always seems to be technical problems with the studio, which meant the edit was certainly a challenge. The interview itself went well, but visually for the bulletin it was lacking pictures, we needed to see pictures of the jail to illustrate the story so that was one element missing.  When it came to deciding which part of the interview to use for the bulletin, I must admit I went with the safe option of reporting on the improvements of the prison as this had already been covered by other regional channels. As Claudia said you need to always be bringing something new, it's not journalism if someone else has already done it, which is why on reflection I feel I didn't push the story on. Click the heading to view it online:

Governor ‘confident’ Winchester prison is improving

















Having said this, I also did an extended version that did bring something new and fresh to lead with. A new working regime will be implemented into prisons at the start of this week, and therefore it has been posted up online just in time for the weekend.It also covered the debate over whether prisons should be places of rehabilitation or punishment, following on from the previous article I wrote about re-offending rates in prisons. It was really interesting to hear from a Governor's point of view whether they believe prisoners have equal human rights to us. The editor thought the interview worked really well, it had depth and substance, and it was different to a news report. To read and watch the video interview click the heading below.

New prison regime gets prisoners to work


This is an example of how a story has been found through speaking to contacts, it's before any press releases have been released, and before any other paper has covered it. A note from the debrief last week is that we need to be leading with a new story at the start of the week on the WINOL website, as too often stories have not been updated from the previous Wednesday. There is always a spike in traffic mid-week but then this dips over the weekend when there are no new stories uploaded. I have filed this article as a draft ahead of Monday morning, so that there is some fresh news to start the week.



Monday, 11 November 2013

Week 6 - WINOL: Debrief

There has been vast improvements this week across the board, our circulation peaked on Wednesday to just below 2000 views on the WINOL website. It's important that the traffic is monitored, we should be leading with the stories that are receiving the most hits online, and continue to update the stories over the weekend.

On twitter, we need to be regularly updating what we are doing, to boost our followers. We should be updating social media with what we are doing more, and target those who are interested. People no longer go to the papers as much, they go to twitter, it's easily accessible news.

All our articles need SEO to double our traffic, including headlines, tags, descriptions, key words and maximising this to improve the overall hits to the site and length of time someone spends on the site.

Subbing has improved this week, fatal errors are cleared, and they are all legally safe. But, there needs to be more attack, the stories need to 'sexed' up - it's far more engaging for the audience. Follow the subbing board now, there are deadlines for the reporters. There needs to be an update on a monday morning, the website desperately needs a fresh new story, we shouldn't still have wednesday's old news as our lead. We need a designated editor for the front page, keeping the wheels turning, and communicating amongst the team and subs.

From here on the word camera has been banned in our newsroom, we will refer to it as a 'quote grabber', prehaps this new jargon will catch on.


Thursday, 7 November 2013

Week 6: Justice Gap

Prison reforms to rehabilitate offenders won’t stop re-offending


Following the prison riots at HMP Maidstone this week, I was intrigued by the cause. The riots occurred a day after the Government enforced changes to the Incentive and Earned privilege scheme. It was suspected that the clampdown on prison perks was the cause behind the riots. I wanted to look into this further, and address the question whether prisons should be there to punish prisoners, or rehabilitate them. I wrote an article on Chris Graylings rulings, but tried to move the story on by addresses whether it was actually going to help. I got in contact with the Prison Reform Trust to interview someone there who was willing to comment. Speaking with the Head of Policy and Communication, Mark Day I was able to include original quotes in my article, and give the story a fresh top line.

With this article, I tried to localise it by seeing whether there were any signs of any rebellious activity in Winchester Prison, however speaking with the Governor I was informed that HMP Winchester fully prepared the offenders in advance, and that they were aware of the changes months prior. Following this phone conversation I set up an in-studio interview with the Governor, David Rogers, to address broader prison matters. This feature interview will be broadcasted on The Justice Gap as a national angle, but locally on our weekly WINOL bulletin.

[Click the headlines to read the articles]

On the wednesday an article was published regarding the High Courts ruling which grants the right to anyone held under schedule 7 of the Terrorism Act to have a solicitor present face-to-face.  Jon credited this as a 'speedy' turn around, as it was up on the site within an hour of him messaging me the story.

Terrorist suspects given right to solicitor present during questioning


Week 6: WINOL

The Guest Editor this week was Will Boden, from BBC Daily Politics. He was extremely impressed by the running of our newsroom and 'blown away' by the fact that we are doing this every week. He said the mix of stories this week were really varied, and the lead story [shipbuilding job cuts in Portsmouth] was spot on to lead as it was the biggest news story of the day, and close to our patch. Will liked the use of the two way between the studio and the newsroom, however he suggested we included some footage of David Cameron. 

The interview with Rowenna Davis followed, this was good interview but a point Will addresses is that we shouldn't assume our audience have followed the story and know all about it. We don't want to spoon feed our audience but we do want them to be aware of what it's about so more consideration to explaining it in the link is needed. Will suggested this shouldn't have been the second story, based on the audience that we are trying to engage with it would have been more suitable to have a more localised story higher up for instance the 20mph speed limit story, or the scrap metal package. 

The Scrap Metal package has been the best piece of TV Journalism to air on WINOL according to Angus Scott, and I couldn't agree more. The entire package had every journalism trick, it was heavily picture lead, included NATSOT, a range of sequences, lots of varied GV shots wide and close up, and perfect scripting to pictures. What this package does extremely well is it keeps the viewer watching and thats purely because it is full of pictures, and this is what TV is all about. There are moments where there is a small pause in between shots, which Will encourages as it allows the pictures to breathe as they roll on, giving the viewer a moment to digest what they are watching.  

The 20mph speed limit package was a great effort to be more imaginative with pictures, both Angus and Will agreed that the use of a GoPro was innovative but the story needed to have pedestrians in it as it was lacking the hustle and bustle of central town. 

The dead dogs story was also another great story adding variation to the mix, Will said animal stories always go down well with the audience, this was one of three stories that had animals in it - dogs, dolphins, and hedgehogs! This was a good package, which Angus deemed a 'free story', by this he meant it was good to have a follow up from the story we covered previously, keeping up with the contacts that were made. In this instance we didn't need to state the footage was 'archive' even though we try to be as transparent as possible. Will made a point that we should look out for jump cuts, and avoid jarring moments as there is one point where the dog magically changes. 

The uni strike story was a good campus story, shame we didn't have any footage of the teachers striking or speak with any of them, but the interview with the Deputy Vice Chancellor was good. The radar story had some good set up shots allowing you to lead into the interview. Just remember the rule of thirds, as he is quite central in the shot. 

The hedgehog was the 'and finally' this was another good package, Angus credited the first 15 seconds of this opening as the best scripting to a news VT, it told the story instantly and from the very beginning the audience knew what the story was about. The PTC with the hedgehog was also a nice touch, however it would have been nice to see a bit more personality come through, and to demonstrate the hedgehog in a more playful way but it's understood that in these circumstances that you were asked to keep it informative and more serious. A point was made to ensure our links are not repeating what we are saying in the package, the PTC could of been cut in half to avoid repetition from the queue. 


Monday, 4 November 2013

Week 5 - WINOL: Debrief

There is no personality in news, we should be writing like robots. 

The text stories online are very poor this week, as training journalists we need to practise our news writing. We should not rely on the sub editors to completely change the story. Read the papers daily, you need to be aware of the news agenda every day, keeping ourselves briefed on breaking news. Listen to the Today Programme, or local radio stations to keep informed.

Structure:

Headlines: Subject Verb Object

Subject to verb must agree on tense, case, plurals
The subject must be capable of  producing the action in the verb e.g "The cat sat on the mat" - this is a perfect english sentence - 'sat' is the logical verb that the subject 'cat' is capable of.
Passive voice - 'The mat was sat on by the cat" - although still logically correct,  keep to the active voice.

Top line - Who What When Where Why

Mood follows - Why has it happened?

Quotes 

If you lift a quote, you need to attribute the source, e.g 'he said in a statement'

Tip- Verbs of attribution - date the statement, e.g 'said last week', 'said today'. 

Ultimate quotes - 'It's a nightmare' and 'It's a dream come true'

Partial quotes - we don't use ellipsis '...' 'quote,' he said, adding 'quote'


Punctuating your quotes:

He said: "This is a nightmare."

He said it was a "nightmare".

"This is a nightmare," he said. 

"Every time you have a fact you need to diffuse it like a bomb disposal,
if you don't check it [facts], it'll blow up." - Horrie


Comment Vs Fact

Fact - Independently verifiable statement - always in the reporters voice - cross checking, fact checking and research is so crucial, the more facts you have the more valuable your journalism is.
If your facts have not been checked, and you are unsure, either leave it out, or fudge it. You do not have to always be right but you must never be wrong.
Comment - This is everything else - always in the interviewees voice - do not try to pass off comment as fact.

After para 2/3 - people begin to zone out - pack it out with quotes and facts.


To recap:
  • Write simple, declarative, active headlines
  • Do not comment in your own voice
  • Verify your facts, leave it out or fudge it
  • Do not lift quotes without attributing the source
  • Punctuate your quotes correctly
  • Don't wait for editors to sub your grammar

Wednesday, 23 October 2013

Week 4 - WINOL: Debrief with Angus Scott

There is no definitive answer to journalism. 
We all have differing views but we all share the same goal - 
- to tell a story

The key focus is is the end product, no one really cares about the excuses and troubles along the way, the problem this week was storytelling.

We need to be pushing our stories forward, the initial news lead needs to be developed further and pushed into a TV package. We should be gasping the reaction more, who is being affected by it?

The bulletin this week was fairly picture light, lots of interviews and some big names amongst it including Steve Brine, Vince Cable and Chief Constable of Hampshire, but nearly all of these interviews didn't have a set up shot.

Set up shots are so important to link into an interview, and give you a few seconds to introduce who we are about to see. Even if its a walking shot, but sequence shots are so important, and crucial for TV.
On the topic of pictures, a variation of close and wide shots also makes it far more interesting, it gets boring if all the shots are of the same width and depth, experimentation and creativity is key.

Audio is of equal importance to Visual, you should always be monitoring the sound levels, using radio mic's with your interviewee. A note for reporters who are asking the questions, favour yourself and speak into the microphone when you are speaking, we want to hear your questions clearly too.

Presenters need to be breaking up the packages by looking down in between each story, this signifies that the story is finished and another begins.

Commentary such as "I am here" is banned, this is terrible TV everyone can see there is no need to explain. However, in other cases where you have a story that you assume everyone may know when they don't background explanation needs to be made explicit.

Overall this week, it was a good mix of stories again, but the bottom line is reporters have to continue to work harder, not give up and push the story on. Most importantly scripting to pictures and narratively telling the viewer the story is the biggest piece of advice to take away this week.

Monday, 7 October 2013

Week 2 - WINOL: News Editor Update

News writing
All reporters need to have a written story up on the website every week - follow this checklist when writing your stories:
1. Headlines - 'subject, verb, object' - do not use adjectives
2. Top line - 5 w's - must begin with people -  banned from starting with a body e.g. Hampshire County Council
3. Main body - facts must always be right, and from original source - 'you don't always have to be right but you must never be wrong'
4. Quotes - essential to bring the story to life
5. Photograph - to illustrate the story, crucial for viewers on the website
6. Figures: above 10 and below 3 include number otherwise write the word e.g. 'five'

Packages
Don't try to be original, this is news do it exactly how its been done before and how you see it on TV. VTs must:
1. Begin with your best pictures - engage the viewer from the start - don't begin with a piece to camera
2. Rich NAT SOT at the start to accompany visual
3. Views must be balanced
Things to think about wh Meadeen filming:
1. Lighting - white balance cameras, check shot is not over exposed, do not film in front of a window or in a really dark room!
2. Framing - rule of thirds, don't be afraid to get in close to your interviewee
3. Audio - radio mic your interviewee, check your sound levels before you interview them it should not be peaking but the green bar should be passed the half way mark, move the channel dials up and make sure you are on manual so that you are in control!
4. Shots - film sequence shots to link into your interviews you need to have lots of rushes and cut aways to cover jump cuts. Editing will be made so much easier if you have a variety of shots, be creative with your angles, hold your shots, zooms and pans are now banned - avoid this my taking varied wide shots and close ups.
5. Interviews - do not introduce the interviewee e.g. "I went down to speak to..." We can see this!

News conference
Reporters this week has the potential to be great, we have a good mix of stories - just need to pull the interviews through and make the calls.

Tom -  Court report - Brilliant text story already up on the website, just get the mug shot up online now to positively identify the defendant. This story has received a lot of press already so I'm really impressed you got this story from court. Try get hold of any photographs from police that can visually boost your package. Aim for 40-60 seconds PTC outside court, speak slowly and clearly to keep viewer engaged.
Lucy - New baby Zebra born in Marwell Zoo - This is going to make a really nice 'and finally' package - keep it simple, lots of quality shots of the zebra and the zoo will bring this story to life, push to get hold of a zoo keeper, but the main focus here is the zebra so think about angles and varied shots. Do your PTC inside the zoo, no guilty signs we know you are there, we want to see something interesting and relevant in the background.
Harvey - Half built hotel on cricket ground - This story is a great local story which will interest our audience, we established Eastleigh Borough Council is investing therefore push to get an interview with a council representative, e.g. Keith House. Well done for getting access into the grounds, film loads of rushes so when it comes to editing you have lots to play with.
Emma - 177,000 6 year olds cannot read or write - I know you're doing your best to contact local schools, keep pushing as visually you want to have the subject straight at the top of your package, without the children baring in mind the legal issues this package has the danger to be visually weak. Contacting the university education department for their view will work well and localise the story.
Nadine - Well done for getting access tomorrow into the announcement of UKIPs regional representatives for the European elections, good work on using your contacts and organising an interview with Diane James, grab as many political figures as you can, with the help of Alex this will be a great political story which you already plan to localise with the south east region representative. Good luck tomorrow, keep me updated. Alex please Tweet as the day goes on with any breaking updates and take some stills so we can use them for text stories.
Ellen - Scientists reveal pollution is destroying bees smell - Great idea to use stock footage and show the clip from 'earlier in the year', this is a good development story, stock footage of the bees will lift the package, be a bonus to get a beekeeper and you doing a PTC in the outfit. I know you've made lots of calls already and you are just waiting to hear back from them, hopefully the scientist and beekeeper will be in touch. 
Zenna - 'Stoptober' awareness -  Fantastic work this week, you had already organised your interviews and have spoken with a nurse already. I know you're in contact with someone who is doing Stoptober, with the case study this piece will be brilliant, get lots of cut aways of cigarettes, smoke and remember what I said about being creative with the scripting and shots, this can be a really visually led story. Well done for taking on board what I said about the lighting and interesting backdrops, from what i've seen already you have listened to what I said.
Calum - Loads of ideas again this week, keep them in the pipeline, the national park story will attract our local audience so I am pleased your running with this one. The others were a bit news weak, but the ACSO story can be developed on when you find a news angle. Good work getting an interview organised with Councillor Mel Kendal, film sequence shots with him to tie into his interview, and avoid pans of the green space, just hold the shots.
Spence - Compass meeting tomorrow - keep in mind that we may need to recycle some of this meeting and put it in to the bulletin. I've seen the coffee house session edit, really well done for all your hard work editing please get it up soon as you can.
Liam - You're working on a feature this week, but good work trying to push for several different news stories this week.


Sport - Tom Baxter - great news to hear you covered the match with three cameras looking forward to seeing the footage. Once I've seen the features I can decide if we need to fill space in the bulletin but we will keep in contact.

Main notes from editors meeting is that we need to continue to boost our public profile online, keep tweeting please its crucial to target relevant audiences. 

We are also looking to produce a 'contact page' online so that people can contact us with ideas they may have.

Good Luck to everyone with their stories, remember we want quality sound and visuals, as well as amazing content!